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This week for writing we peared up and wrote commets on each others writing for speeches and what we could do to make our speeches better! My topic I wrote about was Why students should NOT be paided to go to school!
Here are the comments my buddie gave me to help my speech be better
I started off by changing my introduction into something that has qeustions and makes the reader or listener engaged
Then I wrote about how I have pocket money and that most of us get chore money or bday money
I added some more research in and I added more writing
What do you think about Students being paid to go to school?
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