Welcome back to my blog!
Last week for writing we were working on our speeches again! I did NO POVERTY you probely know already because I said that last week!
Anyways heres my work!
What do you know about poverty?????????
I am a student at St Francis of Assisi Catholic School. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Dear Zoe,
ReplyDeleteI really like that paragraph. I don't know much about poverty but I think you do. Maybe next time add more colour, I really liked the title it made me really want to eat it.
-Kate O